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| LaCharlatan 2008-03-23 ch 1,  | abuseI picked this to read first because of the title. "I can't say I'm an honest person...Honestly..." Loved the mild sacasm there, but I have to say, you ended on a powerful note. I stared at the last four lines for quite awhile before I hit the submit review button. Good job! |
| lost for words 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuse"Because when the defenses fall, I don’t really know who I am anymore." Those are beautiful lines, really. Great job. |
| Ditzyleo 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI thought I would chechk out some of your work. I found this to be a really powerful peom- there is just such a vulenerable truth to it that makes it enduring. The last line in particular is especially memorable. Really great poem |
| RynDevien 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good and very original! I really like the part about the melody. The first line followed by "Honestly" is a great opening. Hm, stuff that can be improved... I can't think of anything. lol |