Great story! I really like the character of Roxxi. She's very unique and interesting. I definitely can't wait to see more of her. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Is she really fat or just full-bodied and her mother thinks it's fat? No, full-bodied is not a euphemism for fat. You gotta make something happen in this, like a twist or something.

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Really good!

Keep updating.

Signed,

Dream Rain

Nice. I like Andrew; he seems sweet.

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Interesting, though I think you're taking your sweet time development wise. But still very intriguing.

You HAVE to give us a formal introduction to Andrew Carter SOON! But now she's set on avoiding him. GRR! Hey just wondering, how do you get the hearts in, like the ones you used to divide?

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So now her secret spot isn't so secret, hunh? That would be a terrifyingly embarrasing situation, wouldn't it, having a cute boy see you sans clothing.

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