|Reviews for Celestial Guardians|
| Enigmatic Night 6/16/07 . chapter 1
like I said... not a manga reader, but as far as what I think warrants a good manga read, it's good.
You switched tenses quite a bit, so maybe check on that. Typos.. yeah they were there, but I'm guilty of typos all the time so.. *shrug*
Interesting that you had it start with the history of the place before going into the story with the appearance of the buses.
A bit weirded out by the bus door noises.. "Plop"? lol
Oh well... sorry I'm reading this late at night and I need sleep..
Good start.. setting up the story well. Might need to reread through it again and smoothen out dome sentenced strengthen a few character actions.
| GreenLushPixie 6/11/07 . chapter 1
the plot's great...i have a feeling i'll be having fun reading the next chapters...