Hey,

like I said... not a manga reader, but as far as what I think warrants a good manga read, it's good.

You switched tenses quite a bit, so maybe check on that. Typos.. yeah they were there, but I'm guilty of typos all the time so.. *shrug*

Interesting that you had it start with the history of the place before going into the story with the appearance of the buses.

A bit weirded out by the bus door noises.. "Plop"? lol

Oh well... sorry I'm reading this late at night and I need sleep..

Good start.. setting up the story well. Might need to reread through it again and smoothen out dome sentenced strengthen a few character actions.

Keep writing.

Enigma

the plot's great...i have a feeling i'll be having fun reading the next chapters...

more power...