 Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-04-19 . chapter 1I really liked the end of this one, it was cute and i totaly didn't expect it. I think that you could have made it flow a little better though the sentances were a little choppy.
If your bored next month you should try the review marathon theres a link in my profile. |
 ally 2007-06-18 . chapter 1 wow that was different! NICE |
 jekodama 2007-06-12 . chapter 1That was really sweet, a good one-shot, I really liked it.
Until the next review! |
 jessa faerie 2007-06-12 . chapter 1ok, i think i understand it... but im not sure. they are married? and they keep celebrating by reliving the way they met??
xoxoxo |
 Miraculous.Science 2007-06-11 . chapter 1AWW! that is so sweet...sighs...oh its just so sweet, i cant get over it. oh i really cant get over how sweet it is. thats all i can think to describe it. i love it! |
 ihrtbks 2007-06-11 . chapter 1Huh? So she's married to him, right? But then what's up with the whole "one night stand" that "we should do again next year"? It's cute how he goes "you might want to open the door" when she asks for another date. Even though I didn't really get it:
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!! |
 Lavender L. C 2007-06-11 . chapter 1Very good work.
You were able to make the concept flow and even have an interesting ending.
When she put her wedding ring on, I was like, "Oh really." - LOL. |
 Toby 2007-06-11 . chapter 1 Nice, I can't help but smile, it's so romantic and well written. Nice job |
 Alenor 2007-06-11 . chapter 1hmm...ok then. interesting. cya later ~ Alenor. |