hold on, if he's from her imagination, then how...? Never mind. I tried finding something wrong with the story, so the review would be at least a tad bit helpful, but couldn't. it was awsome ;)

Oh... Holy cow... I figured from reading the beginning that it wouldn't twist like it did. Good job little lady, you sure got me with the ending and I have to say, that is the best part about the story. Why? Because you wouldn't expect that. You'd expect the normal instead of abnormal. I liked the little parts of the song you put in as well. It helped the story become clearer and that's awesome.

There's nothing really I found that I'd suggest or even think of suggesting you change. (Not something I do often) But your story, perfect the way it is. Awesome work, little lady. You've once again, earned my praise. :D

I like the way this is split into segments.
The crying girl segments - emotional yet effective.
The flashback, curious and yet odd.
The voice, showing the change.
The attempted save, showing the love between the two.
The ending poignant and beautiful.
Wonderful work. ::))

That was absolutely wonderful. Thank you for writing this :)

~carm~

wow. . . that was amazing. I so-o-o-o wasn't expecting the end. This was an excellent one shot and the lyrics went along with it amazingly. Keep up the awesome work.
Faith