|Reviews for On Addiction and Video Games|
| Basara 6/13/07 . chapter 1
so to others...
| xDancingintheRainx 6/12/07 . chapter 1
To me, this sounds more like a statement than poetry. I think if you changed it around a bit, to say something that would make someone think about why video games are addicting, or if you added something to this that was more than a statement, I think it could make the poem itself a better piece. )