=O NAUGHTY NINJAS! TSSK

I'm so worried for her! I wonder what will happen next?!

still a great story, interesting how you have each representing a body feature.

why is it ironic that she lives for a rock?

I'm very interested in this rock that did not come from the earth... hmm...

Miss Red, all the names you come up with are so freaking cool

i cant wait to read more!

GAH, NEED MORE!

Who are the Hade'is?? and the Ga'dis?! PLEASE TELL US!

*meltdown*

I like your use of mythology in this. I wanted to ask you if you were going to mention Pythia, but i supposed i would find out by reading it. I was not disappointed. I really liked this chapter, but please write longer ones! I'm always dying to read more and then they end! @_@

meep...

well, I hope the next one comes out soon!

Very good very good, Is El not human then I take it, and is it going to be more then something between the two, :O

Really creepy, a good look at priesthoods corruption.

Well! This was a very gloomy chapter indeed. O_O it seems you were right to call this story angsty, hehe.

Now, i know you told me this character was based off of Mr. Platypus, but i can't help but wonder if the views expressed here are fictional to fit the character, or whether you are channeling your views into the story. I find it interesting that the character turns not only against the human advocates of God, but from God as well, but that brings me to the opinion that this can't possibly be about your views. Well... at least, last time i checked you didn't hate god, lol.

I think it's a pretty interesting commentary on holy leaders in the world today. But i can't say i agree entirely, because a human's actions are dictated by a human's decisions, not by the religious denomination to which they adhere. But i'm probabaly reading too much into this.

This character intrigues me. I wish we had learned more about the stone in this chapter, but I'm sure there is more to come. I look forward to reading more!!

HAS he been to hell? O_O..

*demands longer chapters* ^^;; I'm sold. I want to read more of this! *stares hungrily at it*

What do these devourers devour?

Hmm...

I can't wait to read more of this, Miss Red!

I like how this chapter sets up the idea of tiers of society. It allows the reader to get the vibe of how the protagonist feels.

I'm really curious now. I wonder what this hole is, why it's there... and how the stone ties in... Hmm...

I finally read it Red. It was good.

I love this, especially the way you handle the psychology. It sounds like a very interesting story and I can't wait to read the rest of it. Keep up the good work!