but my heart is as black as coal
my soul as cold as ice
my blood as dark as the ocean’s abyss
my eyes are the only gates to light and freedom

I love those lines...! of all the things ive read of urs, which isnt that many but yeh, this is my favourite poem so far...

I loved this!!
espesially the part you say
my eyes are the only gates to light
nice job, keep writing
:]]
and if you ever get a chance,
reveiw some of mine