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Crymson Tears 2008-06-29 . chapter 1
osh** Was this about me, or our other self-destructive friend?

AND:

I've been cut free for...A few months.
Le Cosmonaute 2007-07-30 . chapter 1
Hm, shows a different side to the arguement. "If you think that it'll help/ that it'll end your suffering". Opens a new window. Nice job, short but meaningful, though in the last stanza, second line, there should be, I think, a comma at the end.
that reality 2007-06-12 . chapter 1
You have a direct an dunusaul way of writing. Do R&R my pieces too. Thanks and keep it up.
castelgard 2007-06-11 . chapter 1
kudos for the very poignant message. love the way you put words, and how direct your poem can be. plain, simple, and direct.
IwasSmitten 2007-06-11 . chapter 1
I'm just wondering, but are you referring to cutting or a suicide attempt? If it's the latter, I like how you're implying that death doesn't necessarily mean an end to suffering and the overall attitude of indifference.
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