|Reviews for Dear, But Never Close|
| Jesse the Storyteller 4/19/08 . chapter 1
Wow. Very interesting mechanism you used there with the shape of the poem. I don't quite understand the meaning of the poem, but I really enjoy the phrases that you create. "Hearts widowed by time," I especially liked. I think that the closing lines are especially powerful. Very interesting poem. :)
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| Esther Jade 4/19/08 . chapter 1
This is a very visually interesting poem. I don't quite how you managed that but it's very effective.
Partly because of its shape, though, I find the words lose a bit of their impact. Its harder to trace the line of thought. And the line of thought seems very abstract.
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| amelodyofspring 6/16/07 . chapter 1
I take back wat I said about ur best poem before, I think THIS is your best poem! hehehe, it has a little drop.
I would tell you what my favourite lines were, but they were all my favourite lines! I wish I could write like you...:'(
| Professional Dreamer 6/16/07 . chapter 1
I like it, especially the shape. Couldn't quite string it together in my mind to say what makes it so appealing. It just is.
| hicetnunc 6/12/07 . chapter 1
awesome shaping！that must of took a while ：）
however， i must ask why you capitalised every new line even if it was in the middle of a sentence
or perhaps you wanted it to break off into a new sentence？
：P good job anyways！ keep it up