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| xDancingintheRainx 2007-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseA heartbreaking piece. I loved the last stanza especially. This piece was really brutally heartbreaking, and very deep. The imagery was beautiful, deep, and tragic. I'm adding this to my favorites. =) Excellent job. I'm sorry this review was so not-very-helpful, but I'm sitting here kind of shocked and at a loss for words of what else to write. Very powerful, great job. |
| Simultaneous Tick-Tocks 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseOuch. I've never actually wholeheartedly wished on a star. It all seemed too fake to me. But the thought of wishing on one is romantic to me. xD ~tick-tock |
| Jeffers. 2007-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is so true. ...and depressing. |