A heartbreaking piece. I loved the last stanza especially. This piece was really brutally heartbreaking, and very deep. The imagery was beautiful, deep, and tragic. I'm adding this to my favorites. =) Excellent job. I'm sorry this review was so not-very-helpful, but I'm sitting here kind of shocked and at a loss for words of what else to write. Very powerful, great job.

Ouch. I've never actually wholeheartedly wished on a star. It all seemed too fake to me. But the thought of wishing on one is romantic to me. xD

~tick-tock

this is so true.

...and depressing.