|Reviews for A Shame|
| The Jynx of Kari 6/12/07 . chapter 1
I like the wording of this. I like the 'the making your heart sqeeze with the events that you should care for' contrasting with the 'apathetic American fool's thoughts.' I like it. Amercians [SOME] suck for that. lol
| paradisgatan 6/12/07 . chapter 1
Excellent writing. That's such a common feeling though, isn't it? Scary.