|Reviews for Falling|
| Definition 6/12/07 . chapter 1
I really like this. It's so simple and such a common event but that's what makes this haiku so original and powerful. Great job!
| a silenced revolution 6/12/07 . chapter 1
Good imagery. Nice haiku.
| Simultaneous Tick-Tocks 6/12/07 . chapter 1
Ah, it reminds me of New York City. I feel bad for the leaf. D: