Reviews for The Subway Car - FictionPress.com

amrita 2007-06-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow! That was really good! I actually felt the emotions of the protagonist and that's really hard to find in many of the stories I read. I love the ethreal mood and the way it leaves you wanting more. Great job!
sunshinexx 2007-06-12 ch 1,	abusewait... so is the guy like a daydream or ghost? and did he die sometime ago because of cancer? anyways. CUTE. make it into a story. =) please.