This makes grammar Nazis like myself giggle in glee!

Ha ha this one was great. I wanna hold you in parentheses; how come we don't hear that more often?

OM! i love you. this is pure genius. favorites!

LOL! That's funny!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

:D!

punctuation is love.

renny-chan

I must say (comma) this is very amusing (period)
You must write more (period)
WRITE MORE (ten exclaimation marks)

This is quite an amusing piece! I quite enjoyed the way you played with punctuation; even the punctuations were also held in parentheses! The imagery of being held within parentheses comes across very strongly as well, and it's an interesting piece. Nice try! :)

This is devastatingly amusing! Excuse me while I spontaneously burst into a grammar lecture.

Brilliantly creative!

I throughly enjoyed this.

wow, that was really cute and clever.

Haha! That is very clever. I enjoyed it. =)

I know this is supposed to be silly, but this line really stood out: "Arms entwined like ampersands." I love that image.

The whole thing sounds like it could be a song--if not by The Beatles, maybe Lemon Demon. Great work!

I thought your poem was adorable, very wity. I'll be reading more of your poetry.

wow this ISH SO AWSOM! PUNTUATION MARKZ RUle!?...,!./
c i luvz them 2! lolz
plz plz plz r & r mi poems no 1 reeds them...,.
= (
aniway this rocs!
~jessie