That took me way to long to "decode" but it was so awesome... until the end. Stay happy.

um...I don't want to come across mean or anything but I hate it when people type with numbers. We have letters and they're for writing words. I won't read this poem until you re-write it in proper english.

Ok, um I'd comment on your poetry...but I can't read it. I've been looking through your other poems, and more specifically thier reviews and you would not be galmed near as much, if at all if you wrote in proper English. This is not presented as a flame, I'm trying to give you advise without being cruel. Please take it as such. Also while I do applaud you for your bravery to sign flames, please properly read the summary and if all else read the warnings that are commonly present. Don't not just flame to flame, it's rude.

Again this is not a flame at all. As stated I simply can not read what you have written, FictionPress is filled with people who respect the languge in which they choose to write, and you will not be widely accepted if you do not at least attempt proper English.

I'm terribly sorry if you have seen this as rude, I assure you that was not my attempt.

OK i don't want to be mean or hurt your feelings or anything but trying to read this gave me a headache, i'm not sure if it's in an attempt to be original or something but the end result is i couldn't read it. so try something new..GO to your english class listen to the teacher..you'll learn something becasue the way you spell at the moment is harder to understand then spanish...and i don't know spanish

da 1st part made me roflmfao!!11!!1!1!! but den it got so0o0o0o sad i luv da metafuors u use, dere rly nice

Is this a joke? Seriously...?

l337 speak isn't liked or wanted on FP. It's kind of sad.

Learn proper English, please.

Um - maybe it's just me - but what the hell are you trying to say? Perhaps if you use PROPER English people like me might be able to understand your writing.

Rowan.