Short and sweet. I liked it. (:

AW!! This is so unbelievably sweet!! I love it!

I just noticed...it's not angsty--which isn't bad, mind you!! I like a good fluffy story!! It's so short and sweet that it makes me want to squeal. But I won't 'cause will probably freak you out. (I'm good at doing that, aren't I?)

Loves it!



p.s. read my story when you get a chance.

Hm I'm not too sure about this. It was all good and nice and touchy feely and cute until the last line where it...dripped? XD It melted a bit too much on the last line. What I'm trying to say is that the last line is cheesy. Since they have names I kinda...feel they should have a story. It's not just a scene if they have names, they become people. It's not just an event. It's clear that the piece was done on inspiration, which is great. I think it should be expanded and become a part of a bigger piece. Good luck!