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simpleplan13
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abusethis is sweet in a twisted way with the leashes and such.. I really love the line "But he’s my Heaven, Hell, and Earth"
angelfire25
2007-06-19
ch 1,
abuseThis poem is very sweet. I can't relate to this feeling in a guy-girl way as I've never been in that situation. But you bring across the feelings so well that I do understand what you are feeling. Its very powerful, I like it.
VIOLENTLYmistaken
2007-06-14
ch 1,
abuseWhat a promise. I can really relate.

I loved this line:"...Though we pull in opposite directions, we check/To see that the other let’s out no cries..."

Great job

and thank you for the review. I really do appreciate it.
Susuka
2007-06-13
ch 1,
abuseI wish someone would think this about me, just reversing the genders in this case. I tend to act like the guy in this poem, but none of the guys I have dated have ever treated me like the girl acts. I enjoyed the imagery within your poem, you really have a talent with choosing your words wisely.

Keep writing.
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