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| simpleplan13 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abusethis is sweet in a twisted way with the leashes and such.. I really love the line "But he’s my Heaven, Hell, and Earth" |
| angelfire25 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is very sweet. I can't relate to this feeling in a guy-girl way as I've never been in that situation. But you bring across the feelings so well that I do understand what you are feeling. Its very powerful, I like it. |
| VIOLENTLYmistaken 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseWhat a promise. I can really relate. I loved this line:"...Though we pull in opposite directions, we check/To see that the other let’s out no cries..." Great job and thank you for the review. I really do appreciate it. |
| Susuka 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI wish someone would think this about me, just reversing the genders in this case. I tend to act like the guy in this poem, but none of the guys I have dated have ever treated me like the girl acts. I enjoyed the imagery within your poem, you really have a talent with choosing your words wisely. Keep writing. |