|Reviews for Fallen Down|
| Simultaneous Tick-Tocks 6/13/07 . chapter 1
Hm, I suppose you fall down with it. Unless you can find something to hold on to...
| a silenced revolution 6/13/07 . chapter 1
I would try to lift it back up, but I'm not strong enough... great haiku and metaphor.
| Ashelin 6/13/07 . chapter 1
Feel very scared. Great haiku. I love how there is so much meaning behind all the words you write. Great job.