Wow. Thank you for writing this. NO child is ever happier than when they dance in the rain, and you're right. I think we've all got so caught up finding 'true' love, and being with them forever. Finding the other half of your soul. I think we've forgotten about the other kind of love; the one where you already know that each person is beautiful on the inside, even if they don't show it. The one where you know you can say ' i love you' to a friend, and know you're not meaning it like 'that'. Lets just let it all go...

i loved the message. the terrorist part was a little dramatic, but other than that it was a good piece.

Wow. This was thought-provoking, and to be honest that's a rare thing on fictionpress. I love the simplicity of it and the way that it's written. Hell, I just love it all. Lol. Great job. :D

I really like this non-poem. Very truthful...It's got me thinking...which I like. Loving so much must be exhausting...I'd like to try that. I know I'm not being very eloquent, but I'm a bit overwhelmed. In a good way. Anyways, what I'm trying, quite ineffectively, so say is that I really liked this and that I love you too.

Well.
Not quite sure what to say, I can't say I like it, because I'm not sure I do. But in its rawness it's really amazing.

My favorite line
"they look like freedom"

Just wow.
Good Work.
No. Great Work.