I love how it has a not-quite-perfect rhyme scheme. It doesn't detract from it because it's so dream-like and surreal.

It's a nice poem. The only real complaint I could have is that it lacks much substance. Still, as something just for fun goes, it tickles your tounge and puts you in a better mood.

Interesting. Very sureal. I really liked the "Pixie dust/Fairie must/Tears like purple heather." Great job!