ok... good... hm, recount your middle line... but I'm counting it off...

nice...

kind of cute. your middle line does have 8 syllables however.

A haiku is 5-7-5 in syllables. Yes, your second line has 8. Kind of a cute poem I guess.

Nice ^^. I love haikus, but unfortunately wouldn't be able to write one if my life depended on it. i counted 5 syllables in the last line, but there were 8 in the second one and i think that's one too many.

the last line has 5-syllbiles. i not to good wither but it does have fice because tasty has two yllables. i triple checked. lol