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| Gradius Armon 2007-07-29 ch 5,  | abuseNot bad. All i can say is try to be more consistent. Like, oine chapter was a single paragraph, one was like four sentences. Other than that just try to gradually lengthen your writings and you should have some pretty good stories. good luck :) |