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Reviews For: UnRomance me Baby

IlfirinEstel
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuse"just maybe hear my heart beat sound/a little less like your name" I lovelovelove that line. It's beautiful.
The Prettiest Banana
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful.

The lines -
"and just maybe hear my heart beat sound
a little less like your name,
and a little more like a meaningless thud."
and
"darling you were such a little addict,"
- are my favourites. Just beautiful.
Michelladora Moon
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseI should have paid attention in intro to film when we watched Casanova. "Darling you were such a little addict" is my favourite line. I love it.
memaw
2007-06-14
ch 1, anon.
abusepretty good for a granddaughter like u love ya
VanillaOreo
2007-06-13
ch 1,
abuseI've felt the same way before. Ahh... yeah... so this was a nice poem. I liked it. =D
je suis une pomme du terre.
2007-06-13
ch 1,
abuse*cough*Afreakingmazing*cough*
I HATE YOU! For this poem especially!! It's so amazing!!
And your style's all... what's the word... like... husky or lusty or flirty or something like that XDD The way you use words like ba-- [[replying to his msg]...[[kay im back XD]] like baby and darling and stuff... its uber hawt lol. (uber hawt makes for good poetry =]) Hahaha once again good job. Love the metaphors like with the soup and stuff xD

~~>T.H.
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