this is such a sweet poem :)I think that when u say "waves roar in my brain", "brain" doesn't sound too good. maybe if u said "head", or "mind".

did u mean to put everything in run-on sentinces so that the speaker is just asorbed into the beech senary and doesn't care about anything else?

"intoxicating" is a little too modern and too harsh, i think. but i still luv ur poem b/c it's better than any writing i could do :) :)

You have a wonderful way with words. This was really great =]
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Not really anything else to say lol...

That was cool...(tear)

wow lindz that's nice poem. i'm jealous. XD