Thats a really good poem, i really like it. good job, keep writing,
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That's good, hope you get to meet the real her.

this is touching and its just the way you describe things that makes it brilliant...i know i've told you before but you truly are one of my favourite poets and one of the best on this site (and i think the poems on this site are much better than most of the stuff i read for my english course by "famous" poets!)

Wow, that was amazing. I love that, so much emotion. It's absolutely wonderful. Very sad and meaningful. Great job, I'll add this to favorites later.