wow haunting are you going to contiue with this story or is it a one shot?

awesome job sad but awesome I could seethe whole thing with vivid clearety.

i wish u luck on your writing!
A Dark White Rose

What an amazing work! Beautifully written! So tragic... You really conveyed the emotion well and your description of her dancing was masterful... I can't wait to read your other works!

hello! amazing and colorful piece, you have improved! i'm sad to say that I'm leaving fictionpress to fulfill my novel for a company. but i will still read your stuff, but you might have to e-mail me of updates or new works because I won't be able to check my e-mail as often. but you are an amazing author and I still would be honored to read your stuff. have a nice day!
-anime freakizoid