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Reviews For: The Turtle

FreedomStar 2007-07-12 ch 7,	abuseA slightly abrupt ending, but I can understand that you got tired. Still, I enjoyed it! It was a unique storyline, and shows the aspects of love that don't ever get published; that it doesn't always conquer, and not everyone get's the happy ending they wanted.
FreedomStar 2007-07-11 ch 5,	abuseMy favorite chapter so far! I was wondering when CJ was going to tell Melissa. She seemed to take it all in stride. It was so simple and sweet, that little moment between CJ and Jon. And so very sad. :( Anyways, I really enjoyed this chapter, and am looking forward to the next!
FreedomStar 2007-07-05 ch 4,	abuseIt seems to be the same material as before, but somehow it's different and really adds to the story. I'm waiting for when something is going to happen; like those tickets that 'angie' has. I guess they're going to the concert in the next chapter, right? That'll be quite interesting. I can't wait! They're going to the concert on the anniversary of CJ's 'death', right? How ironic.
Reaila 2007-06-29 ch 3,	abuseI love this story! I think the characters are really believeable; CJ's reaction to the rumours is especially so. I was actually expecting people to think Jon is just talking about his dream, like of being a great musician or something, but then I guess it is pretty easy to pick it up from the song.
FreedomStar 2007-06-28 ch 3,	abuseI might be the only person reviewing, but there are probably more people reading and just too plain lazy to review the chapters :) This was a good chapter, I liked how it showed that they were all slowly moving forward but still clinging to the past. It happens a lot, and is so common that it seems so natural for them to react in this way. I also liked how Jon reacted to the 'meet and greet' afterwards. My favorite artist, Taylor Swift, does hours upon hours of meet and greets after her concert because she knows that it is her fans who put her where she is today, and I just think that so many celebrities don't understand that if they treat their fans like ** then they're screwed because it could all be taken away in a second. Anyways, I did notice there was an origami turtle hanging in 'Angie's' car. :)
FreedomStar 2007-06-21 ch 2,	abusePoor CJ! I honestly can't imagine ever having to leave my life behind to pick up a new one. Stupid Mafia people who pick bad places to kill someone. It's all Giorgio Vizzino's fault, if he hadn't picked such a public place. Don't these Mafia people have secret hideyholes to do all of their nasty and underhanded things? A question, why did you decided to call this story 'The Turtle'? I'm assuming the significance of the title will be explained further on, but just thought i'd ask anyways. Wow, so much happened in this chapter! I am looking forward to the next one :)
FreedomStar 2007-06-13 ch 1,	abuseHey there, I was wondering when you were going to start posting another story! This start-up garage band seems to have that bond that the other group from "A Run to Forget" had. I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story.

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