|Reviews for No Limits|
| 11th Commandment 6/14/07 . chapter 1
"When the body no longer functions as the brain desires,
human become restless."
seems so true at times. good poem.
| TaltushMeiMei 6/13/07 . chapter 1
It took me a few readings to figure out that there was a rhyming scheme here, everything ran so well I didn't even notice. That you were able to create a rhyming poem that flowed so well is quite impressive. There's something interesting about the poem itself. It has something that seems to me almost political, but it's not exactly so... Either way, it's an interesting poem that has several very interesting images and an overall good rhythm. Nice job.