hey. i'm not sure if you're still updating FINDING ROME but it's the funniest sweetest thing i've read and i hope you continue to have writers block so that you carry on with it. wait, i mean, i hope you like it enough to continue it as well as your other stories.

the dialogue style is very smart and neatly done, like it really gives you a clear picture of what's happening even though it's quite minimalist. so thank you!

update! i love it!
please, keep it up!

seems interesting

Wha! I love it. Lovelovelovelove's all over it. Yussyussyuss. o.O. I am also very tired and probably should be hit with something before I go to far with this review. But seriously... this story... thing... that is kind of... not story-ish is just the funniest funny thing I've ever read. Kinda cute to... I love what Rome thinks about the TV, little people trapped inside a box, it's a classic. My favorite word is naughty and really kind of icky so I'll use my other favorite word, which is Pedophile :D. Not so bad... or i that doesn't work, I also like Pseudo... and Pillow... any P word will do. Hooray.

omg he gutted the TV! awesome! Michael isn't going to be very happy. XD

lol. I really don't know what I can say about this chapter other than it made me laugh a lot. Awesome story btw! ^^

haha. Rome hugged the TV. Can't wait to see what he's gonna do to it. ^^

aww. *hug* hope you feel better.

aww. I almost feel bad for Michael.

lol. Poor Rome. He'll eventually get the hang of being human. ^^ I love your characters by the way.

plutonian aliens!

Ah, I came here after you commented on my story, Wheel of the Year, and I realized that I've read this before- before I had even gotten a FictionPress account. And I really liked it. And I still like it. I love your characters. The whole set up (format... whatever, i hope you get what I'm saying) doesn't allow for much outside of dialogue, but you still develop them really well. Through dialogue I realized that I find Rome amazingly cute. :)
I just wonder what he looks like.
Sorry for the rambling. It all comes down to my one suggestion: keep up the great work.

-Z.S.

Heh, okay, that was pretty sweet. But your chapters are so short!

And anyway, it's about time that Michael had a sweet thought about his alien. Just one. To show us where you're heading. Because... I KNOW that's where you're heading... right?

Omg, this is really hilarious!!

You just about killed me with the Human Mutant Thing, ah. Update soon! Please, this is really funny.

Michael should have known that Rome would take his tv apart when he told him to figure out how it works. Weird, but funny story.