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| CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2007-08-15 ch 1,  | abuseNice sentiment, but it bothers me the way that it's mostly unrhyming then all of a sudden there's a big rhyming section in the middle. It doesn't sound right with it that way. Keep writing. Constance |
| EyesEmphatic 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseYou can tell this is very heartfelt. Aside from the use of 'you' instead of 'your' in the line "Of you fingers passing over", this is good. Thanks for your review of 'Lust', I hope you might take the time to review some more of my work. |
| Summerdazed 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseThis will bring tears to many who knows how it feels. Thanks for writing. review me if you're free! ^_^ =summerdazed= |