Your poem is a clear portrayal of strong emotions, and while I think it's well done, I think you should change the title. FictionPress does NOT allow titles to be inappropriate in any way, shape or form, and this includes profanities. You can leave the inside title the way it is, but I'd suggest just adjusting the external one.

Other than that, I think this is an interesting poem. I like the song-like rhythm to it that made it quite catchy and original. The rhymes don't feel forced and overall it's good.