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candid 2009-02-20 . chapter 2
Well, I was browsing through my favorites and came across your Mommy's on the Radio. And then I found this. I must say, it's definitely creative and quite amusing. Especially how he gives her homework-what an interesting twist on a very strange fetish.

I hope you update your stories soon, darling. (:

xCandid
Damia Rose 2008-03-17 . chapter 1
So far, this is really good. You've created a great contrast between the two characters in regards to age and comfort levels with the topic being discussed and included so much little detail that they are both easy to relate to. My mind is frantically trying to put the pieces together. Good Job!
Thoughtless7 2008-03-06 . chapter 7
Yup, George is DEFINITELY my favorite character. XD

I liked that story, I did! :D I do wonder how things will work out. *pets George* Great job! ^_^
Thoughtless7 2008-03-06 . chapter 6
George is totally my favorite character. :D *goes to read next chapter*
Thoughtless7 2008-03-06 . chapter 5
I love cats, I really do.
Thoughtless7 2008-03-06 . chapter 4
...Let's see this oh-so cunning plan in action, shall we? I may have to grade it. XD
Thoughtless7 2008-03-06 . chapter 3
Aw, Sierra! This is what happens when tykes and young-uns like us fall in love! Things go to extremes! D: *reads more*
Thoughtless7 2008-03-06 . chapter 2
You don't have a loli fetish, Steve? Liiaar. XD It's okay, I love little loli-shota boys meself. Oh snap, I just admitted it! XD Ah, well. As if the world didn't know.

I like how this story's going, I do.
Thoughtless7 2008-03-06 . chapter 1
*laughs* That was a hilarious conversation. XD I connected with Angie so much it's not even funny, it's like an evening with my best friend. Sans the sex and the lesbianism, but we're still young-uns and straight. Well, except for my recent yuri writing spree on XD Seriously, hilarious style, great grammar. Next chapter! *goes off to read*
Dexterity 2008-02-19 . chapter 1
Very interesting story. I've never seen something like this before. The writing was fluid, easy to understand, and fit the mood of the story very well. Good job on that. As for suggestion, I think you can actually take out some of the detail in your story. Honestly, not too much have happened in this chapter but it is quite long, so to speak. If you can get down to the point a bit quicker, it would be an even better read. It is still really good the way it is now, so keep it up!
Twilight Starr 2008-02-07 . chapter 6
Great addition. You have a lovely way of telling the story. Terrific work. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2008-01-04 . chapter 5
The beginning was spectular and amusing. It was an amazingly good chapter. Fantastic work. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~
DazedStarr. 2007-12-29 . chapter 5
much love for this story!

update mega soon!

!!TooCool4Tv!!
Twilight Starr 2007-10-25 . chapter 4
A report card. Oh, my! ;)

Great chapter. It was very amusing.

Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-09-22 . chapter 3
Dramatic chapter.

Looking forward to more.

~Twilight Starr~
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