Cool. I agree with one of the previous reviewers, the "morph into something beautiful part" was the best. It's got a really strong tone and I like the words and the contradictions and the parallel structure. Can you tell I've been tutoring an eight grader in English? Great poem.

Thank You.

I'm a freshman in college...and this is just like a slap in the face to reality that is my life. You worded everything so perfectly.

Probably, one of the best poems I've read. No joke.

- Kay

"I want to morph into something beautifully imperfect/I want to die with scars and tattoos/Something to show that I have lived/Simple laugh lines will do"

Favorite part. I can really relate to this poem, you worded it very well. You clearly expressed a feeling that's hard to put into words, so kudos on that.

I can relate to this poem so much! It's so well written; your choice of words and flow are excellent. I love this! Great work and keep writing.