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no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseI love your haiku/tanka/whatever so much, you have no idea. You're one of the people I get seriously excited to receive an author alert from. (Not that I read the poems right away, or review them, anyway, but you know.) You always manage to make your poems so original and fresh, and with such startling images that you can't help but be awed. I love "artificial and wholly skeletal, with a mouthful of acids and nerves." Wow! Incredible work. Keep writing! :)
recycle rhymes 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abusei like those tankas. very powerful and captivating. nice work.
say this sooner 2007-06-25 ch 1,	abusebeautiful.
Her Wishing Well 2007-06-24 ch 1,	abuseI love this twist on alice in wonderland. You write brilliantly.
darkling thrush 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abusei like the title, first off. you have a unique way of wording things--it's very appealing. and wonderful. the Cheshire boy, i knew instantly what you meant. the poem as a whole made me feel anxious and troubled-sorta. but the last line made me smile. curiouser. :)
Basara 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abusewonderous wanderings indeed... nice...
she smolders 2007-06-16 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, this one's special. I love the twist to the classic Alice in Wonderland story, especially since it feels like you told the real one. And the second verse just makes me smile in a sort of sad way. Just awe-inspiring really.
i brake for franzy 2007-06-14 ch 1,	abuseLove the metaphor, and the way you pulled it off even under syllabic constraints. The last two lines sealed it for me. I enjoyed this quite a lot, hehe. .x.
Ashelin 2007-06-14 ch 1,	abuseOh dear I adore this. The last two lines were so perfect too, just wonderful. I do not really like rules either. They murder inspiratation. ;D Haha, anyway, this was really good! I loved the images and thoughts you've made. Great job! Ashelin

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