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DarkUno 2009-10-17 . chapter 1
WOW! SERIOUSLY!

I've gotten up to about the end, and this story is just BRILLIANT! Can't wait to read the sequel.

(And I will when I'm done, lol)
13thZodiac 2009-08-18 . chapter 65
I love this story! You write really well! Keep at it!
Sister Kitty 2009-07-23 . chapter 45
Im on chapter 45, and I cant help but say I love it! Stacy's dad is crazy but he's funny. I hope guys like him dont really think like that..
4M4ND4 2009-07-01 . chapter 1
This story was so well written, I'm really looking forward to the sequel! Please update soon!
Panda 2009-06-28 . chapter 19
So I found this story at 1:00 in the afternoon today, and I just finished it, AND I LOVED IT :] You're an excellent writer, and I would love to hear about this planned sequel :D :D
Corrupt the Innocent 2009-05-29 . chapter 1
I loved this story. It was awesomely sad and it was amazing. Also I'm happy that Will and Stacey finally got the happy ending, especially after all th sh** they had to go through.
reader 2009-04-15 . chapter 50
But I thought he was arrested! What happened?!
reader 2009-04-15 . chapter 47
I think it's unrealistic that after being brutally bashed by a baseball bat, he's well enough to leave that night, no matter how urgent. He shouldn't even be able to walk.

Now onto the next chapter
reader 2009-04-15 . chapter 42
Okay the bastard needs to be placed into a mental institution for his wrong SICK thoughts.
Hopeless Romantic802 2009-03-26 . chapter 66
please let me know when your sequel is up
Delfemia-Chan994 2009-03-17 . chapter 66
This had to be the best story i have ever read...
i could see it happening as i was reading it...
the sequal is probably gonna be better than this
-Delfemia-Chan994
ramshaia 2009-02-27 . chapter 41
This story is totally awesome! You have to make a sequel!
mavoi 2009-02-21 . chapter 66
Amazing story and plotline. Great characters. I love Alex and Stacy and Will. Gotta love Morris and Ed too. Tough job done very nicely. I am talking about the plot. It was a difficult subject matter. And although the story was long, not one second of it was boring. I cant praise it enough. You are an outstanding authoress. Thank you for sharing the story with us for free in fictionpress. The only thing that I have to complain is about the way in the end Will is totally butchering Stacy’s childhood and future career. I mean of course her dad did a nice job of botching her freedom and happiness, but now Will is treating her as if its all right for him to get a new car for his 30th birthday and its all right for her to get a baby for her 18th birthday. So now Stacy, the straight A talented student with an amazing voice is nothing but a plump stay-at-home mom! I hope in the sequel Stacy gets to do something about her own career. Goes to college and stuff. I really liked Will when he was helping her with everything and was concerned about her homework and college etc. Stacy is such a strong lovable person. Please don’t make her become a baby-bottle toting couch potato. Again, I love your story and am looking forward to the sequel.
arenaskies 2009-02-17 . chapter 4
that was really random :P
arenaskies 2009-02-17 . chapter 3
dam, he's mean
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