I like this idea. I think the story has real potential. I'm excited to see where you take it...

i really like where this is going seriously though, i think you should start typing the rest fast cause i really am looking forward to the rest. laters

:D I think Imma like this story. I can kinda relate. I have sort of drifted a little from one of mah friends. But yeah..

I love the name Alice. And I liked the outfit she was wearing. O.o efkgjtblfg. Anyhoo, can't wait for teh next chappy~.

You've caught my attention...Good job. :]

Not bad, I'll keep an eye out for updates.

i really REALLY liked it! i hope you continue!

Good beginning. Hope to know more by the next chapter!

oh, non-slash... O__O woahz.
i'm excited, though. this seems cool.
i can't wait for more. -dances-
pahahah. "now that you're awake, i wanna do it." XD
hokai, i don't know what else to say.
'cept i love you!

WOO FIRST REVIEW!!

lol.

I just happened to be online when you posted :)

I lurve the way this story starts, actually. Its...good. Can't explain it cause I'm way too tired but, I know what I mean. And maybe you do too. If you think like I do.

The whole thing about two people drifting apart is kinda cliched but I hope you pull it off :D

And no, the fact that it ain't slash doensn't put me off.

x-Jeni-x