u go gurl!! ** dem hos who say ur not gud riter cuz u totallii r!!

I agree with Ashelin. And, to boot, you can get banned for writing the way you do, if not have your poems deleted and your account locked for a couple of days.

Please realize that you won't always get "nice" reviews like you want. If people have constructive criticism to contribute, don't just call us "**" and go on your merry way. When you take everything offensively and respond in kind, THAT'S when people start flaming you.

You DO have some good emotion in your pieces. It's too bad that most people can't understand it.

Like I said before, you have great ideas. And I can see you have emotion in your poetry. But the reason we tell you to write properly is because of respect. People will not respect your poetry. And you are being very childish in the way you are approaching this. Why don't you want to write the right way? What do you have to prove?

This is not a flame. A flame is an irrational review that is based on bias not on constructive critsism. I'm just trying to help. I hope you realize that. Keep writing.