I'm back with yet another long awaited review. You know, I'm gonna take this opportunity to say that I am trying to take your advice on making one of those He said, she said stories that got you to read Trail of Forgiveness, but I have to say, for a person as morbid and serious as myself, it is not easy (not that I don't have a sense of humor, I'm just boring most of the time). Anyway, I don't want to bother you with my personal troubles, so let me describe how detailed and how mysterious this is. And with the cliffhanger at the end (Yes)?!
I think this is really damn good. I would like you to expand, if you can find room in that creativity, yes ma'im! Oh by the way, expect another review sooner than later.

Very nice. Simple, but meaningful. Good job on this!

~carm~

this story has sucked so much ** so far. I'm proud of you. I didn't think it was possible to suck so much **. Good work. Keep updating it, **! i love you very much, along with the whole damn world (except that guy who beat me up at church in fifth grade). Yes, my life is awesome, and thanks to this suck-** story, it's a thousand ** times better! yep. Nice one. Mental high five me when you get this bad ** called a review.