I love the imagery here! I think my favorite line was "To fly away from disdain", because I feel that way a lot. Keep it up!

It is hard to believe a liar. How do you know when they are lying or telling the truth. Neat poem though.

SirScott

I love how at the end of a bunch of your poems, the last two lines always bring so much more to the table. Wonderful.

Rowan.