 The Jynx of Kari 2007-07-02 . chapter 1OK. I'll review. lol. So yeah. Practice what you preach is what I got out of this. Short and simple is nice. Buutt... shouldn't there have been some sort of rythm in it? Like, it doesn't have to rhyme, but it should have a nice beat... Not should, but it'd be nice if it did. lol. Lost track. teehee
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