Pretty realistic.

can't wait to see what happens! update soon!

I think this is a really really cute idea for a story and I would love to see where you plan on going with it. pLease update again soon!

Oh i would never do that :P
please update soon=] i need to read some more

write soon write soon WRITE SOON !! UPDATE !

It is good, but you are right- it really does need an ending. Badly.

again, forgot my password :-S
Well, it's bloody frekking fantastic!! You can't leave it hanging!
Update or I'll set my evil minions upon you! **Rubs hands evilly, smirking** They haven't seen daylight in a while **cue horror music**

I started reading this a while back, but I had to stop for something...I forgot what. I can't believe I didn't finish it earlier. This sounds like it's going to be an amazing story. So update soon!

oh...nice story! love how her first bf proposed to her after going out for 4 months xD looking forward to the next chatper!! ^^

Now that was good! And a brilliant idea. Update soon. Or else =]

*dies laughing* Please tell me none of the marriage-at-thirteen-after-4-months thing is based on your real (which I happen to know is Jewish) life? In which case, I will pity you but secretly not wince for my people as much whenever I hear stuff about the Pope blessing cars or w/e (seriously, Benedict, WHY??) Anyway, twas really good.

"Done and done" -hm, where have I heard THIS before? XD Sa'll good.

This ought to be vewy, vewy, interesting. I will be sure to keep an eye on it. *hands you a Boqie Doll for your pleasing work- come on, you know you want one*

lol!
Cant wait!

Awesome!

This is a TOTALLY awesome story. I like it, you should go on. :) If you can though, I know how inspiration goes away so quickly.

wow!
usually introductions like this one turn me off
cos' most are poorly written and tend to waffle on
but urs is so well written, i was simply intrigued!
im really looking forward to the next chapter
i think the story is excellent so far
and has the potential to become something very addictive!

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