Nice story. depressing, but nice. (I mean that in the best way possible!) lol.

i love the ending line.
its interesting how in some of your language/descriptions, you can be both vulgar and beautiful. some nice imagery that drove the point home in there as well.
lovely.

Wow that was moving. You made feel her pain and sorrow. You need to write more tho. I want to see where this goes.

'a river of tears'. i love that line, its so beatiful! this is a good story, though the guy needs to divorce hi wife if he's gonna do THAT.