hm... what band is that you are talking about? ( getting less update to bands i guess? lol? )

nice?

Interesting. Not quite sure what it's about, but I like the sound of it.

Unless I miscounted, the middle line has six syllables, so it's not quite a haiku.

I've never heard the song, but I really liked this. The image and the story I can imagine in my head from this. It kind of reminds me of "Wild Boys" by Duran Duran. I don't know. It was just really good. Keep writing.