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| Seventh Chords 2007-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Neat twist at the end. I was starting to get a little lost somewhere in the middle, but the end reeled me back in. It's quite true as well, the message you brought out through this. Good work! |
| vaudeville summers 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseooh, nice twist. very realistic approach to the things we build up in our minds - sometimes people tend to lose their grip on reality xDeanna |