You can see the inspiration you got from 'Hey Jude.' :) It's a good song, and it's a good poem.

I can see you were channeling some people in your life and I think that's great. The poem has a personal touch and I think that's what makes great poetry. It has to have feeling and it does. Good Job.

Very interesting. I'm not a big fan of love but this was a very well done poem. I wish I could say more but love only brings me pain so I'm more into the "love destroys lives" kind of poems. Plus its from a female's point of view (I think). But otherwise good job.

I really liked this, it was very, emotional...kinda got to me a bit even...flowed nicely as well...