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| s1LeNtaNg3L 2007-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseYou know I love all of your writing, but this one probably more than the rest. I think your teacher would be happy that you finally made one personal :-P Oh, and the answer to all those questions is yes. |
| Genesis Rose 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseAww this is so sweet! I really like how you repeated certain phrases in this- especially 'Jenny Lee, Come play with me?'. It really worked in this poem. I like this a lot. -Genesis |