That was a sweet poem. I'm more into the dark and dreary sort of poetry, but every once in a while it's nice to come up to the surface and read something that's full of light and love.

Very sweet poem! I love how you say : "it's jaded" - but i'm saying it anyway... Yes, plain feelings sometimes only need simple words. And you handle them perfectly.

Wow! Thats awesomee...I really wanna hear the music to go with it...if this is your song...i really like it..a lot...And to think you wrote all these in one night...wow!