Great poem.

Twilight Starr

Kinda contradictory, but I guess that's the point. Good story.

wow , that was actually pretty good. i enjoyed the rythm to it. i lack some of that lol. great job

*evanescence123*

This one needs a review too. This one made me feel a little sad, but it is good when the reader starts to feel a certain emotien from your work. I like the bit about being an induvidual and I can only imagine what it must be like to loose a friend. Keep up the good work, you're a good writer.