nice work it really caught my attention and i liked what you did with giving vamps the choice to either live in the dark or light.. never really seen it done that way.. very interesting!

I love it. Vary well written. Can't wait for more.

amazing.

Interesting I say. Your take on vampires seems to be following a subtle trend I've seen with the whole 'day walkers' thing. I'm sure you'll put your typical dark spin on it and make Gabriel the next poster boy for insomnia and therapy.

I always see shades of your psychological thought process, mainly in how Gabriel views himself rather than the world. It's interesting when people try to create deep villains. But with vampires there's a certain leeway, only if you truly look into the mythological aspects of what a vampire is.

I'm not worried though I know you can make Gabriel's 300yr old heart bleed. I'm curious to see how your take on vampires evolves through this, and where are the boobs?